Crush

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    • dragonpsyche
    • is deliberating between sleep and wakefulness...it's quite a conundrum.

    Crush
    crush
    soft swimming seas
    lucid green flavor
    drops
    by drop
    to the pitfall stop
    wave into wave
    lime sweet
    breeze
    unease tasteless
    tease
    tongue slides
    swiftly over tooth
    over teeth
    tastes the lips
    salty skin
    flesh of flesh
    heed
    there not eternal
    drinking water from furious
    seams
    liquid gold
    slush
    hinders the mind
    and the mean
    crush by ~dragonpsyche
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    cmlestrade commented on Crush

    11-01-2009

    Enjoyed the structure and rhythm of this poem. very intense and erotic,
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    In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

    Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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