Broken

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    Broken
    Broken

    reflecting on the things i've done

    more like walking on broken glass

    each piece cuts, draws blood from my soul

    broken promises

    broken hearts

    broken dreams

    broken souls

    cutting into my flesh

    draining my lifes blood

    weakening my resolve

    until fall on my face

    and thrust the shards in my eyes

    and roll in them

    cover myself in bits and pieces

    of all the lives I've broken

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    adacn commented on Broken

    04-11-2009

    Very good. I love reading the minds through words.
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    sk commented on Broken

    04-08-2009

    Wow...regret is a b*tch, eh?
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    Poetry is what is lost in translation.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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