blue

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  • tragedy
  • is sad because i know i'm losing everything

blue

people ask my favorite color i say blue
people ask why i'm sad
i'd say i feel like i'm on neptune
without a person to call dad
people ask why i'm crazy
i'd say run in the family
people say im depressed
i smile happily
but they know the rest
people say i'm a loser
i'd say i know
poeple say i look like a bruiser
i'd say that blows
enough about them...its about us
like da love hate the fuss
i hate seed school
but i love the person true blue

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sweetdesire commented on blue

10-01-2009

This poem is really deep. it really shows how you really feel about True Blue. I know she loves you.

Smith2Smith commented on blue

09-30-2009

..that was...different. i love the last line..=) keep up the good work

tragedy

09/30/2009

thank you =P

Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

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