Blind To Self-Destruction

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    You can't choose your family but you can choose to rise above and be better than what you were shown. Don't let something or someone be your handicap

    Blind To Self-Destruction

     

    I have potential and you’re potentially evil

    I do things honestly but you can’t help but be deceitful

    Always looking for a way to pull off your cons

    I’ve told you to change a million times with no response

    Can’t you see you’re destroying our lives?

    Your children hate you and you can’t protect your wife

    You’ve demoralized my soul and provided me with hatred

    Always in control are you a father or have you faked it

    You judge me fuck you I’m better alone

    There’s nothing I won’t do when I have a son of my own

    I will be so much better than you ever were

    Give my family love and hope not make them hurt

    I wish you could feel what we have to feel

    You’re in a fantasy world but to us it’s real

    I just want you to stop and think

    What does your life really mean?

    It means absolutely nothing at all

    It hasn’t for years your existence is so small

    You infect the world with your sickness

    I have no pity, respect, or forgiveness

    You’re just not worth it

    I’m going to have a life of my own without you and it will be perfect

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    elizabethalaina commented on Blind To Self-Destruction

    07-08-2009

    wow. that was good, i really respect what you wrote.

    davoc

    07/08/2009

    Thank you very much!!!

    scrye commented on Blind To Self-Destruction

    07-08-2009

    I LOVED this poem. Great work, to rise above and be able to hold the strength to say what angers you. Way to go my friend, i give you a 10 for this one

    davoc

    07/08/2009

    Thank you! It was hard to start but when I did the words just flowed out

    Dreamer123 commented on Blind To Self-Destruction

    07-08-2009

    woooaaaah! You showed alot of emotion in this poem. :O

    In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

    Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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