Battlefield Painter

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Battlefield Painter

The painter plants the brush, sprouts a shrub
Atop the hill, beside a tree, beneath the sun:
The cannon roaring, the metal clashing
Is but a lull, a murmur to the concentration.
The conflict engulfing the easel gose unsensensed,
The eye breathes in the distance,
The hill-top, the tree, sun balanced above,
On the horizon, in the distance, withn the canvas.

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dumplin commented on Battlefield Painter

11-03-2009

I could picture this! (lol, not trying to be punny). There were just a couple of spelling errors in this, but you painted a vivid picture. I wish it were longer.

rougepriest commented on Battlefield Painter

10-18-2009

is this one from high school also, spelling and such would make one lean towards thinking so............, anything written lately/.? I am a painter so your first line caught my eye ( it wasnt breathing) kinda cool metaphor that one

lucindaclaire commented on Battlefield Painter

10-18-2009

Very Interesting! Check out the last line. "Withn"... Is it supposed to be "with in"?

Singcanary commented on Battlefield Painter

08-26-2009

love the creative thinker...can see your direction it takes me...the artist is the tool to expressing what "is". very nicely done...loved it

Dreamer123 commented on Battlefield Painter

07-31-2009

very peaceful. i love it. this made me relaxed. this is amazing. they way you put this poem together is amazing. great job. :D God Bless you.

Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

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