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    Artistic View

    Freehand touch, mind makes up the picture visualize/
    Drawn to canvas like a moth to light mesmerize/
    Pencil in the pieces missing making the picture clear/
    erase the traces of lines no longer wanted there/
    hands speak for vocals when voices can't be heard/
    Eyes act as ears soaking in unspoken words/
    Graphics break away falling from the easel stand/
    Three D images escaping imagination land/
    Freeze, chill out to calm the high degrees/
    wipe away the sweat and don't forget to breathe/
    Breathe, let oxygen in and lungs fill/
    Don't fear the expression, This art shit is real/
    Real, Life put down in different forms/
    Slowly breaking away at the stereotype of norm/
    We are forced to face this blank wall/
    Some accept the colorless while others choose to draw/
    Draw/

    Freestyle sound, slow down the thoughts that circulate through the mind/
    Arrange each word so that it fits into a rhythmic line/
    Motion the hands cast a spell to leave crowds hypnotized/
    If in battle then render opponents paralyzed/
    Imagination takes over intensifying skill/
    Extreme focus falling deeper into the sypher still/
    Finding the minds at a higher state than when at the start/
    True words spoken from the core of a poets hart/
    Freeze, chill out to calm the high degrees/
    wipe away the sweat and don't forget to breathe/
    Breathe, let oxygen in and lungs fill/
    Don't fear the expression, This art shit is real/
    Real, Life put down in different forms/
    Slowly breaking away at the stereotype of norm/
    We are forced to face this blank wall/
    Some accept the colorless while others choose to draw/
    Draw/

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    gjmichele77 commented on Artistic View

    05-11-2009

    Only an artist could have written that! Excellent rhyme and meter. I could feel your soul. michele

    Niecy commented on Artistic View

    04-02-2009

    Felt the vibe & Loved your flow! The canvass of your Artist Obscure but Real, Sooo many colors! Good write.

    orsonav commented on Artistic View

    03-21-2009

    This is a very good work.

    When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

    John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

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