All I've Caused

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    All I've Caused

    I caused the emptiness, I caused the pain.

    I took away the sunshine and replaced it with rain.

     

    I caused the loneliness, I caused the ache.

    I took away the strength and gave it a point to break.

     

    I caused the sadness, I caused the despair.

    I took away the trust and ripped up every layer.

     

    I caused the exile, I caused the guilt.

    I took away the freedom and everything that we had built.

     

    I caused the doubts, I caused the fears.

    I took away the smiles and replaced them all with tears.

     

    I caused the depression, I caused the void.

    I took away the future and left it all destroyed.

     

    I caused the departure; I caused it all to end.

    I took away my lover and then I took away my friend.




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    tenderpoison commented on All I've Caused

    07-28-2009

    the question now is what happens next? sometimes hard lessons leave us stuck...or can you embrace change and move on? regret is one thing, self-castigation another. you've a real gift for phrasing, the rhythm is near perfect.... 10
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    christianprep commented on All I've Caused

    07-21-2009

    it a sad crool poem to wards yourself from my point of view but i like it keep it up and strong
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    Bethane1978 commented on All I've Caused

    07-21-2009

    Wow. Thats a very strong poem. Its an excellent poem. Great job.
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    In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

    Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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