A sinner's love

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    • Hello everyone, sorry about the long hiatus, life got ahead of me and I honestly forgot about the website. Despite this I am back and ready to write more poems. Hope everyone stays healthy and have a wonderful day. Happy writings.

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    A girl trap in her own her darkness and blames god for her descending in the darkness and then she meets a boy(her light) and she fight's her self t to let him him in and finally just lets him.

    A sinner's love

     Dear god forgive me for I have sin I should have never let him in
    Never I have     I given up so easily never felt so defeated
    But when you're near me something inside me stirs & just with one touch I crave more
    I know it is selfish unwanted lust
    But I must....search out for this light you bring
    For I am trap in this darkness
    So I reach up out my hand to you only knowing half the truth 
    That you would be     the one to drown me
    Can't breathe Can't believe
    How you seize my conscience
    And held my heart hostage
    Help!!!!! Somebody call the police and catch that thief
    He snatch my heart from beneath all my defenses & made me lose all my good senses
    My body flat lines but wait wait I am alive
    I can't believe you are my life line...My raft my life preserver  my observer
    Dear god forgive me for I have sin I done let this criminal in
    Darkness is where I want to descend into
    But if I do that you would be torn into two
    So I take my words back & attack
    And I stack my doubts on to you
    Yet you already know the truth that I will forever love you
    Even thought I show a facade of disinterest
    I will make this love my etenal conquest
    So it will be forever god bless

     
     

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