A ACHING HEART

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    A ACHING HEART
    AS MY HEART ACH AS MY PAIN TRYS TO RUNAWAY
    KNOWING YOU ARE CUMBLE UP INSIDE
    THERE'S NO WHERE TO HIDE
    THERE'S NO WHERE TO RUN
    TRYING TO RUN AWAY FROM THE FEAR YOU WANTING
    NO MORE PAIN
    NO MORE PAIN
    FEELING HURT BECAUSE OF LOVE
    FEELING EMPTY BECAUSE THERES NO ONE THERE
    CRYING BECAUSE YOU SHOULD OF DID WHAT YOU DIDN'T DO
    KNOWING LOVE HURTS
    CARING FOR SOME ONE WHO MIGHT
    OR MIGHT NOT CAE FOR YOU
    ASKING YOUR SELF WHY
    AS MY HEARTACHE

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    alaskawriter96 commented on A ACHING HEART

    04-09-2009

    Okay, i'm all for the truth in this poem, but i mean i just couldn't pick up the flow of the words. I'm sorry, but i think your message would get across better if you payed attention to its rythym.
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    chessaol commented on A ACHING HEART

    02-21-2009

    very good, the caps are tiresome and should be discontinued.
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    sweetangel commented on A ACHING HEART

    11-20-2008

    i am sorry you feel like that dont we all wish thare was no heart achs in this world
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    cm230057 commented on A ACHING HEART

    10-28-2008

    i like the poem it was very deep
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    Poetry is not an expression of the party line. It's that time of night, lying in bed, thinking what you really think, making the private world public, that's what the poet does.

    Allen Ginsberg (1926-1997) U.S. poet.

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