" The Day "

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  • My Feelings

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    tis new type of poem to me..i hope I did good...

    " The Day "

    He takes me out, its about five till midnight
    tonight's been amazing everything seems right
    he takes  me on a night hike to our favorite place
    he sits on one knee and i look down at his face
    he says all he feels and i tell him my feelings to
    he brings out a tiny black box and says " i want to spend the rest of my life with you "
    my mouth wide and tears rolling down
    i only nod quick for i cant make a sound
    i hug him tightly and he kisses me
    iv dreamed this so many times and now you see
    one day it will be right...
    and I'm awaiting that beautiful night...

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