You see me?

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    You see me?



    You see me? I see you.
    Like a pain in my neck.
    A crack of my nuckles
    That bone that love to pop!
    Like the love I have for you in my heart.
    Thats whats real.

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    Sweetlily commented on You see me?

    03-27-2009

    i like it very much...except it kind bothered me that nuckles didnt have a "k" it is spelt knuckles.

    In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

    Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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