you make me

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    you make me

     you make my smile ,brighten and my thoughtz wider
    you make my love stronger and my kneez weaker
    you make the sun shine and the water flow
    you make my day  when bad thingz happen i cnt control
    you make a purpose of likin and reason for loving
    you make a sad person happy and thats wat i need
    you make me wonder whatz the reason of fallin?
    and i kame up with when your heart stops
    but you keep it pumping
    you make me wonder what it feels tobe without you

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    Chaos128 commented on you make me

    10-21-2009

    … And you’ll make a lot of people smile with these happy thoughts.
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    strawb3rry14

    10/21/2009

    thankju and ju jus made mii happy

    Poetry is finer and more philosophical than history; for poetry expresses the universal, and history only the particular.

    Aristotle (384 BC-322 BC) Greek philosopher.

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