MOMofTWINS commented on yesterday, today tomorrow

09-29-2009

I dont know how many times Ive thought, " Tomorrow might be a better day..." Sometimes it is, and sometimes you'll just find yourself thinking that same thing for the next tomorrow when it isnt. A different way of writting and I like it.

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Chaos128 commented on yesterday, today tomorrow

09-29-2009

Nothing is harder to navigate than the minefield of emotions. you did a very good job of making that clear here. You're writing is really spontaneous and raw, and that ain't a bad thing. I would suggest "cooking" a little longer to smooth down the rough edges a little, but the muse is definitely talking to you.

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chubbc commented on yesterday, today tomorrow

09-15-2009

wow i love this poem its got a great concept to it and all in all a wonderful poem

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Blueroad commented on yesterday, today tomorrow

09-15-2009

Impressive! I think you've given your reader a good chance to communicate with the poem.

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