X-Factor

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    X-Factor



    You're the reason that I trust no one,
    the reason I have trouble loving anyone.
    With all the things I’ve seen and done,
    you're still the only one who can bring the worst out of me.

    I won’t count the tears I've cried,
    this emptiness is still inside.
    I wish I could change the way things have gone
    but I really don’t know were things went wrong.

    I did the only thing I knew.
    I worked and I worked to keep our love alive,
    but I became tired and so unkind

    All I wanted to do was:
    stay true to you and live life with you
    but instead look what happen to us....

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    ListninEar commented on X-Factor

    06-03-2009

    I can relate. You might like to read some of my poems in the "lost love" category! I did kinda notice that while the poem starts off with kinda an AAAB stanza and then it goes to an AABB stanza and then the next thing ABC, CEF kinda thing. I don't know, I kind like poems to either rhyme in some repeated pattern or not rhyme at all!

    caverox101 commented on X-Factor

    04-02-2009

    Epic

    When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

    John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

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