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WoW

That night was the best night I ever had
I was a witness to your body's abilities
you took charge and I can't complain
you played with my mind among other things
so sentual it was you and I
one, two, three, four, five times
WoW...five times
F this rhyme
there wasn't a thin line between us last night
My body so tight
and loose all the same
You went in and again
You get a ten X five
Man I thought of you for days
Didn't know what to say...speechless
I wanted to feel you again
I want you to be my lover
You're too good to be unclaimed
Can I have you're weekly services?
I'm too old for playing games
I'm gonna let you know what it is
I got a beast only you can tame
So I'll see you tomorrow night
I know you'll do my body right
We don't ever need a light cuz it shines within
I give you an A+ from begining to end
once again, F this rhyme
That's exactly how I feel
I'm ready for you to come and make this love real

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When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

Andria910’s Poems (4)

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Midnight Madness 1
WoW 0
You 0
Thankfully Me 2