Worn Down

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  • Inspirational
    • Lover49
    • I'm hoping to get back into writing, I know its not going to be great at first, but I hope you like what I've got

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    This isnt really about anything in my life, but more in my friends life. She always vents to me and this is what came out this time. :)

    Worn Down

     Your a hypocrite
    But of course you dont admit it
    Your whole life,
    I can barley survive on your lies...
    Anymore!

    I've been tossed,
    I've been torn,
    I've been thrown on the floor
    And no, I wont take it anymore

    My heart cant survive
    Im living a lie
    And it's all because of,
    You!

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    Teardrops commented on Worn Down

    02-04-2010

    Next time tell them to get the heck out great poem my friend Marie
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    When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

    John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

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