Where You Are

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Dedicated to the one I love.

Where You Are

Sometimes I wonder where you go

What roads you cross

How you get there

What you do in that place

 

Other times I fantasize of where you are

Where that place is

What color the walls are

If there is any walls

 

One time I told you where you should be

Where it’s warm

The sun chases the moon dramatically

That place is so lovely…

 

A few times I dreamt of where you’ll be

How you’ll get there

Will I be there?

I just want to be where you are.

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TheLastCowboy commented on Where You Are

09-17-2012

Love the way this poem makes my Heart wonder and feel, good write!

lisaner commented on Where You Are

09-17-2012

Very lovely poem start to finish. The last stanza especially.

sincerelymari

09/18/2012

Thank you, that means a lot. (:

Brianandhiscats commented on Where You Are

09-16-2012

Hi. That was really good. I think everyone must know that feeling, the uncertainty and the aching. I loved it.

sincerelymari

09/16/2012

Thank you.

Poetry is not an expression of the party line. It's that time of night, lying in bed, thinking what you really think, making the private world public, that's what the poet does.

Allen Ginsberg (1926-1997) U.S. poet.

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