Wher do i go

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    Wher do i go

     Where do I go from here if i'm in the deepest darkest hole so deep so
    dark you can't see nor here me . how am I to get out , do I go up
    down or side to side . I see a bright light on one side an a dark
    light on the other . I go to the light, it's getting warmer and
    warmer , it is like i'm almost there, just a few more steps . one
    more ... OMG I fell into a deeper and darker hole . it's getting
    harder an harder for me to breath , i'm holding on so bad I feel
    like i'm falling deeper an deeper getting darker . it is so dark
    like a major black-out . I cant breath, where am I , this is what
    I'm going to say with my last breath .... I'm FREE ...
    where did I go ?
    all I know is I kept falling .

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    NyNy100 commented on Wher do i go

    11-19-2009

    damn ma this poem is so so deep. I fell ya pain and at times understand what you mean by where do i go now!!!!!! But boo all i can tell u is.... An angel came down from heaven and called out your name... Unfortunately, you didn't answer, because you was to busy doing you... If you just hold on and be strong, and let go and let God handle it... Everything going to work out in your favor. God timing is alwayz right. He may not come when you want him, but he'll be right on time. Truly Blessed
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    Poetry is what gets lost in translation.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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