When you return

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When you return

I sat around waiting,
You said you would return
I was ready and anxious
because you said you would return
Anticipating your arrival
because of your return
But my phone had bars
And you didn't call
I checked my voicemail
And my mind was blank
I lost all thoughts because of it
The message was as complicated as it was simple
But I didn't know where to start
You were lying somewhere
I thought you would never come back
But you did
I made sure to take care of you
I cleaned you up and kissed your face
I was lost for words in my tears
I sit around at home
Where we lay
And continued to wait
When you return.

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jam4muzic commented on When you return

08-05-2009

I liked the repetition of 'when you return' considering the title. I liked how you made the situation modern. It was good as far as I know. Why don't you also check out my poem? I'm new and I want to know people's opinions.

Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

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