When I See Her

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    This poem was about a good friend of mine. She did not realize how beautiful she was until I wrote this poem to give her some understanding.

    When I See Her

    When I see her sitting there

    With beautiful long blonde hair

    She would have all the guys stare

    With those beautiful lushes lips

    That probably tastes like a sweet wine

    Would let you think that she was fine

    With a body that would not quit

    I would be gladly be the first to admit

    That the girl I see is so fine

    But I know she might not be mine

    So maybe someday in the near future

    I can have somebody like her

    That has beautiful blonde hair

    And would always be there

    So I can feel when she is near

    To know that girl of my dreams

    It will always make it seem

    How lucky I truly can be.

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    Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

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