What i hate about you

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      My friend and i joined up to write this poem.We're only teens so we're not that experienced. So please, comment on how we did.

What i hate about you

     What do i hate about you?
     Basically, everything that you do
    
     How you left me
     Just let me be
    
     Never thought about my feelings
     Or thought about what i was dealing
    
     I bet you never cared
     Not even dared
    
     All the things that you put me through
     Nobody even knew

     The pain and suffering
     You tried covering

     But i got over it
     And you can just quite

     Those are some things i hate about you
      I just wished that you knew

      I'm happier now
      I don't even know how

      Everything that I've been through
      All because of you

     But let's talk about the happy time
     Like you stole my heart
     Just like a crime

    I kinda miss your happy smile
    Want to see it for a while
   
   And the way you look at me
   It makes me all mushy

   But those times are gone
   Just like a dried up pond
   
   It can never be the same 
   Because it never really came

   Though my heart misses you
    I know i will never truly do
   
                 
     
    

    

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