Waterless Rain

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  • Tragic State Of A Collect

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    war and peace, loss so much loss

    Waterless Rain

     He steps through a sheer shimmering curtain
    Aspace void of life
    A stage is set for tragedy
    Dark yet luminous
    Emotions spent before all that is
    All that was
    Ill to compromise
    These our ever changing times
    A clock somewhere ticks
    A cathedral bell chimes
    Then an explosion
    Doves and tears colide
    All that one asks
    Is why

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    Gramma2 commented on Waterless Rain

    10-25-2009

    Your poem evoked potent imagery. I did not understand why you misspelled sheer and shimmering. Typo?
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    jayceemay

    10/25/2009

    typo and thanks for the comment

    Poetry is not an expression of the party line. It's that time of night, lying in bed, thinking what you really think, making the private world public, that's what the poet does.

    Allen Ginsberg (1926-1997) U.S. poet.

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