Wandering Soul

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  • Confusion
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  • Life
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  • Emotional
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  • Passion

    Wandering Soul

    She's so gorgeous
    Yet all alone
    The classic syndrome
    That goes unknown
    Untold until the gravestone is shown

    How she got there,
    No one knows

    Still, she glows
    Near or far, wherever you are
    You can feel her presence
    Its of precious essence

    The man she adores
    Truly loves whores
    Or maybe it's the demons she fights
    Those relentless creatures
    that lurk beneath her

    Lost in an interim reality
    She looses grip with her only love, its fatality
    The demise of her soul
    Her eyes scream loud
    "I just want to make you proud"

    She's so gorgeous
    Yet all alone
    Please let the love fill her, before she turns to stone


    How she got there
    No one know will ever know

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    jyothi commented on Wandering Soul

    07-12-2012

    Its fine writing with kindness for someone and love.
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    TKESS commented on Wandering Soul

    03-14-2011

    I enjoyed this poem. It sounds like the downward spiral that oh too many succumb to. Falling in love with someone we know is not right for us, but too afraid to leave. Sometimes the closer to someone we are in proximity the farther we are from them emotionally, but we just too afraid to admit it.
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    Poetry is when an emotion has found its thought and the thought has found words.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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