Walk within the shadows

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    Poem Commentary

    Life is poetry if your willing to see it

    Walk within the shadows

    Happiness is a moment,
    in the still frame of life...
    As we walk within the shadows,
    always searching for the light...

     Winds bring the changes,
    and the day's bring the night...

    --Love is an illusion, that cloaks the lonely eye--

     There could never be forever,
    for forever would surely pass...
     Your looking for the answers,
    but it makes no sense to ask...

    --But too freeze that moment, would be worth more then wealth--

     As we walk within the shadows,
     only hiding from are self's...


                              Written by: Matthew D. Boyd

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    dumplin commented on Walk within the shadows

    09-25-2009

    U used too instead of to and are instead of our and that should be ourselves. However, nice flow, awesome poem altogether.

    RebeccaKempf33 commented on Walk within the shadows

    09-25-2009

    Very well written. I could see and experience every emotion as I read every word. Good imagery.

    Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

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