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    you are timeless…
    adrift on your own ocean
    sometimes near
    strangely afar

    i still call for you everyday
    every night

    here in the shallow dawn
    we can disappear forever
    floating on your wave
    sailing…

    lost like children on a
    disappearing sea

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    PoetsofBlood commented on Untitled

    09-12-2009

    This really good, the poem gave me images not even like what ya wrote, cool..
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    rimbaud

    09/13/2009

    Thanks for the comment. Imagery is what poems are all about.

    If I feel physically as if the top of my head were taken off, I know that is poetry.

    Emily Dickinson (1830-1886) American poet.

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