~Untitled~

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    ~Untitled~
    Listen... Do U c My hands shiver?
    They shiver like this for u...
    To give U a kiss the way U like, it jst reaches my soul so deep. Look at my eyes, please get closer. Please praise my presence.
    W/out questions; I need you. Please Kiss me, Hold me, Please me. You have Enchanted me that reaches my soul n full fills my mind w endless thoughts of Us. Please kiss me like that, take me to paradise. I want 2 be part of your enchantment. Jst look at my eyes n knw that i want u w every fiver. I knw it sounds crazy but it is what it is. . . Let them comment, Cuz I need U.
    U r my Babiii so kiss me like only U knw how to do.

    MuAhZ!!!

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    Crush commented on ~Untitled~

    11-22-2010

    a few typos but the message is clear. i love to read real feelings and emotions like this. you don't hold anything back because you are sure of who you are emotionally. ..and to me, that is pretty cool.
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