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    This was written by myself and my best friend JohnPaul

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     Night…enlightened by the moon,
     waiting for the fiery mistress of the new day...
    I kissed the fiery brim of the sun,
     as the moon's vertical light paved way for my departure.
     look into the night and you'll see my intellect…
    look into the night and you’ll see my openness…
    with the lunar portal to my heart I await the glistening touch upon my face…
    and once again conscious thought brings me to the amber glow of…Day

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    Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

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