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I LOOK OVER MY LIFEWHAT HAVE I ACHIEVEDWHAT I SEE I CANT BELIEVENOTHING, BUT WHYWHO AM IWHAT IS MY PURPOSEUNDER A MICROSCOPE I SEE A GLIMMER OF HOPEI DARE TO DREAMNO MATTER HOW DIFFICULT I MAY SEEMI REACH FOR THE STARSI REACH SO HIGH BUT UNATAINABLE IS THE SKYTHE LIGHT IS GETTING DIMMERMY CHANCES OF SUCCESS GETTING SLIMMERWILL I EVER MAKE A DIFFERENCE DOES MY LIFE HAVE ANY SIGNIFICANCE

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Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

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