Untitled

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  • Life
    • Kaylimazza
    • I;m Falin in love but its fallin apart i need to find my way back to the start that led my back into your arms...

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    Thats all i got

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    As i should be called
    not knowing left or right
    up or down
    where my life will take me
    or why like makes me frown

    i am young
    yet i still am learning
    of right and wrong
    but
    my life, as i've learned is a wrong.
    a way of right is happiness and i am for nor more near towards happiness






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    Ninjaboy commented on Untitled

    02-20-2010

    i like it...............................................10 from me
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    KING commented on Untitled

    02-20-2010

    I like how youve kept your anomity while still making your point. Kinda hard to do sometimes. Great piece.
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    bjenkins commented on Untitled

    02-15-2010

    I LOVE this one!! I feel exactly liek this sometimes, and it makes no sense sometimes. Awesome poem!!
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    mariadapoesia commented on Untitled

    02-08-2010

    happiness is a path, my friend, my friend, we never get there we just proceed...
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    bforibus commented on Untitled

    02-08-2010

    i do love an emotional rant.confusion comes with immaturity. its what you do while confused, determines the adult someone will become when they rise from the ashes
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    Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

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