Untitled 2

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    Untitled 2
    I held you in my arms
    I wiped your sad tears
    I loved you with all my heart
    and now it's filled with fears

    I helped you understand
    I fulfilled your needs
    I loved you with all my heart
    and then you went and cheat

    I was there by your side
    I was there till the end
    I kept all your secrets sacred
    and now we're not best friends

    I, I, I, I wish I was dead
    To be released by this burden---
    Will i only be alive
    But my heart will keep hurtin'
    If you speak to me with lies.

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    llabanieh commented on Untitled 2

    01-06-2011

    simple yet potent! well done. I've been enjoying your work. hope to read more
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    redbloodink commented on Untitled 2

    12-27-2009

    What a powerful write........... I see you made it through it...... The love of God will never take us where He can't bring us out by His grace...... Red
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    omseattle commented on Untitled 2

    02-19-2009

    you are rising female STAR !! I like you imagination,it is wonderful,
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    syed commented on Untitled 2

    01-28-2009

    just one word-----WOW_____
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    dahlusion commented on Untitled 2

    01-27-2009

    Powerful!! You can die in my arms anytime, and I wouldn't cheat you of a beautiful death.
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    In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

    Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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