Untitled 09

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    Untitled 09

     Tear drops fall in a moment so sad
    Peace is the calling
    Love must retain
    Freedom for all
    We walk lonely steps
    We glide through a life
    Existence for one
    Existence for both
    One is consumed
    One is the host
    If a man cries alone
    Does anyone care
    If a memory is lost
    Does the past not live on
    Have you ever hoped yourself into a feeling of bliss
    Have you ever seen the picture you just barely missed
    I call for the one who almost was there
    I hear her sweet music but can't feel her stare

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    Charlie23 commented on Untitled 09

    01-19-2010

    I enjoyed your writing in this poem, and the title, "untitled 09" is driving me crazy, it so needs a beuatiful title to go with your beautiful words...
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    DJCarson

    01/19/2010

    Thank you for reading

    Marsink commented on Untitled 09

    01-18-2010

    You could call it, 9 Remembrances. I liked it; the mood of melancholy is prevalent and is ripe with imagery!
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    poett commented on Untitled 09

    01-18-2010

    you write so beautiful, I love this poem. This last part captivated me the most and took my imagination flying wondering and asking what if that someone was there... maybe the poem would be a love story to never end... Have you ever hoped yourself into a feeling of bliss Have you ever seen the picture you just barely missed I call for the one who almost was there I hear her sweet music but can't feel her stare
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    Poetry is not an expression of the party line. It's that time of night, lying in bed, thinking what you really think, making the private world public, that's what the poet does.

    Allen Ginsberg (1926-1997) U.S. poet.

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