underneath the sky

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    underneath the sky
    inside you are
    weak
    inside me
    you are strong
    beside me
    you stand
    beside me you are alone
    emotionless
    you dont dare to feel
    is it over with
    is it even real

    one waking hour
    passes you by
    so quickly
    and you sigh
    but retrain yourself
    with new eyes
    crystal visions
    i can see you
    standing there quiet
    and misunderstood
    ashamed of who you are
    afraid of what
    you will do
    next in this life
    underneath the sky
    uderneath the sky

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    Lolee commented on underneath the sky

    07-27-2009

    Interesting. Shows how we are complete in each other. Neat. And we are ever changing...keeps us all guessing...I guess.
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    In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

    Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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