Two Lovers

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    I made this using the poetry challenge on the poetry boards

    Two Lovers

    Two Lovers...
    Hot, Sweaty, Intertwined,
    Heavy Breathing, Hearts Beating,
    Passionate Words, A Loving Caress,
    Two Bodies Come Together,
    Held Captive In A Dance Of Old,
    A Tale Wrought By Two Lovers,
    Whose Stories Are Left Untold.

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    ginga commented on Two Lovers

    07-28-2009

    Alexis, A sweet passionate poem to leave the reader wondering! Ginga
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    devaamido commented on Two Lovers

    06-14-2009

    Great idea: The poem quickly builds in passionate crescendo & just when you've got the reader hooked on "what's next?", you leave whatever"s next to the reader's imagination...saying it's "untold". GREAT!
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    jademelissa74 commented on Two Lovers

    06-11-2009

    You manage to display the sensual feelings well. It is a well-written poem! .
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