Trapped within the Minds of Poe

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Trapped within the Minds of Poe

By: Adam M. Snow

Once upon a nightful somber,
entranced within a loreful slumber;
a murky pass it feels to be:
this dream, this world it calls me.

Dragging, falling deeper within a void,
my mistress Fear and I devoid.
Clinching my chest, my racing heart pounds,
alone in darkness with many sounds;
one in particular from a raven afar,
'Nevermore.' said he with my ears ajar.

Intrigued was I by an outspoken raven
perched upon a branch, in a realm of non-haven.
'Nevermore.' said he, spreading wings to flutter,
"Where am I?" I whispered in terror, utter."
"All that I see or seem
is it but a dream within a dream?"
but the raven he quoth again, 'Nevermore.'
lost I feel, lost evermore.

The raven vanishes, taking me back to slumber;
waking again with my eyes a somber.
Finding my hands and feet a bound,
above a pit with a pendulum confound.
Approached by a man thought to be dead,
Poe he spoke with so much dread.
'We loved with a love that was more than love.'
spoke he, as I lay watching the pendulum above.

It swings with a flutter as it slowly drops to me,
my voice is muted; I am force to see
as the pendulum drops, my flesh gets torn.
My eyes again fell somber as I forlorn.
I close my eyes welcoming death,
getting ready to take my last breath.

I feel it wash over me, it is just that;
my memories flashing of images like tat.
This nightmarish of a dream, I feel forsaken;
my sorrow; I could not awaken.

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Tempestlady commented on Trapped within the Minds of Poe

02-04-2014

i agree it did take on a somewhat formal tone. But i have to say i really like it and i believe artie would too. write on.........there is an audience for this

jenifer commented on Trapped within the Minds of Poe

12-22-2013

i understand that u like poe , but i feel like his formate is holding you back some , u need to better embrace your own voice.

When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

snowpoetry’s Poems (31)

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She became My Gallows 1
Welcome to My House, My Mind 2
For Whom the Hour Tolls 1
Trapped within the Minds of Poe 2
I have seen Maelstroms Eternal 2
I see a Flower 1
The Great Trial 1
Requiem 1
Beneath Still Waters 3
The Puzzle Box 2
Who am I 2
No Rest for the Weary 1
Auspicious of Nights 1
Crimson Flame 2
Ode to a Cross 2
Inferno 1
Forsaken Me 1
Broken Lullaby 1
Lady in White 1
Born of Serenity 0
Beyond Wonderland 0
Swimming in Time 1
What an Age 0
Hangman's Gallows 0
Undying Tomorrow 1
Affliction Woe 0
Remembrance of a Child 2
Ode to a Twilight Sky 2
Sinisterness 1
Pictures 0
Woe is Me 3