Transparent self

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    Transparent self
    So much noise...

    Loudness and piercing thunder, rolling over

    my ears, disappearing behind memories.

    Quit stillness...

    Striking so deep...

    Stinging silence...

    The unapproachable pause...

    Fight out...

    Cup the flame of silent screams.

    Set down the slippery hands of

    unsettled past.

    Snatch the glazed sight.

    Bring on the icy emotional

    state of mind.

    Transparent self...

    Seen by mirror images.

    Cast down...

    Loath, dispraise...

    Touch.

    Distance brings harmony from

    the depths of darkened

    Hate.

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    xxlheart commented on Transparent self

    03-18-2009

    wow...this is an amazingly written piece. in fact to me it is perfect. okay so you are an incredible writer, now all you need to do is get yourself published if you aren't already because a talent such as yours should be shared with those that dream and cannot write poetry but feel it through you. major smiles for finding your work!
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    Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

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