TOO MOM

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  • Forgiveness

    TOO MOM
    YOUR DAYS ARE SHORT
    WHO KNOW: WHEN YOUR BOTTON WILL BE
    PUSHED.????????????????????????????????///
    TIMES I CRY, BECAUSE WE ARE NOT AS CLOSE
    AS WE SHOULD BE AT THIS TIME.
    KNOW I LOVE YOU AT ANY COST
    MILES AWAY AND STILL I DON'T KNOW
    JUST WHERE YOUR MOMENTS STAND
    YOUR IN MY HEART NO MATTER WHERE YOU are
    DAYS I WAIT FOR THAT CALL to come in
    WHEN WILL GOD TAKE YOU FROM US ALL
    ONLY ONE WILL KNOW ,WILL SHE GIVE THAT CALL????????????
    SHE CLAIMS SHE WILL!!!!!!!!!!!!
    I JUST DON'T KNOW; SHE WAIT UNTIL IT TOO LATE
    WILL I GET TO SAY GOOD BYE !!!!!!!!!!!!
    ALL I DO IS PRAY AT THIS TIME!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

    LOVE YOU MOM THAT ALL I CAN SAY




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    Ozzy77 commented on TOO MOM

    11-14-2009

    Nice message to your mother from a daughter (I'm assuming you're writing from your point of view). Just needs a bit of editing and punctuation, and it would be amazing.
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    Lydia

    11/16/2009

    yes it was and that call came in she just passed 11-11-2009

    imthu commented on TOO MOM

    03-20-2009

    great work... with ur permission i would like 2 dedicate this 2 my mom also.. take care... imtiaz(imthu)
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    Lydia

    11/16/2009

    that fine may she be save and hope she is okay mine just passed with in the last week

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