tomorrows color

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    tomorrows color
    Do you know what is tomorrows color?
    Green? so, how about fade of trees?...
    Blue?.. so, how about cloudy sky?......
    Black?. so, how about lighted night?....
    Whit?... so,how about molten snow?...
    Red?... so, how abut dead heart?......
    And,you dont steel know, what is tomorrows color...
    but,trust it,it will be colorful......

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    optimistic commented on tomorrows color

    07-06-2009

    Colorful it will be I never knew the colors to be this way that was a good way of putting it, I like the way you slowed the reader down then speeded him up great write.
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    WordSlinger commented on tomorrows color

    05-11-2009

    Interesting view, :)
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    Poetry is not an expression of the party line. It's that time of night, lying in bed, thinking what you really think, making the private world public, that's what the poet does.

    Allen Ginsberg (1926-1997) U.S. poet.

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