To My Dad.....

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    To My Dad.....
    Life is full of mystery….
    Which turn, which twist
    It can show…..
    Surprises it has in row

    How do I describe
    I want to shine
    Brighter than sunshine
    Brighter than sunshine

    No hope from all
    Fire is within
    Faith in hard work
    Dreams in view

    I will go ahead
    I will go ahead
    Will shine…
    Brighter than sunshine

    Dare to stop
    Try to block
    I m a bird
    No one can trap me

    I will be at peak
    Independent and secure
    You will be proud
    Yes! My Dad

    I need just support
    Encouragement
    Rest leave on me
    Trust me

    Will shine
    Brighter than sunshine !!!!!!!


    By: Romal Kochar

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    hotdonna commented on To My Dad.....

    03-05-2009

    girl i love your poem, i can feel the emotions, good structure, keep up the good work i especially love your poem "once upon a time.
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    Robin commented on To My Dad.....

    03-04-2009

    very emotional and honorable to your Dad, very good...
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    CdeM commented on To My Dad.....

    03-03-2009

    Loved it, beautifully portrayed, and executed with pure power...
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    Poetry is finer and more philosophical than history; for poetry expresses the universal, and history only the particular.

    Aristotle (384 BC-322 BC) Greek philosopher.

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