THE WAY UPSTREAM.

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MAN MUST SOMETIMES IN LIFE CHOOSE THE HARD AND HERCULEAN WAYS OR METHODS! ROUGH ADVENTURE, IF IT DOESN'T MAR YOU, MAKES YOU! SWEET ARE THE SURPRISES THAT A WAY UPSTEAM RESERVES!!!

THE WAY UPSTREAM.

Into the shallow stream I threw a pebble
Rings formed as your water clear I did touble
To dear shelter ran a frightened shoal of fish
For fear of ending up in my yawning dish!

Then I began my hard climb upstream
With both hands I worked my way thru' the weeds
Wild insects invaded the sky as I 'pushed on' forward
I half covered my face from a few noisy bats

Rocky boulders rolled down splashing into the water
Into which one of my small bags was to fall later
I could well have fallen back with its weight in descent,
But continued in the green foliage holding on trees for ascent

The canopy above was too high to show the sun rays,
Festoons of creeping plants held back my every pace.
A left-turn brought my eyes fixed on a squirrel just aside,
Which,scared,made a long-jump on to a tree by my side.

Pictures of some wild butterflies,plants and bats taken,
The steep,slippery and dangerous downstream trip started.
My lesson learnt was to be sometimes arduous in life,
It doesn't always suffice just to be easy and calm!


 

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Mayuna commented on THE WAY UPSTREAM.

10-05-2010

When things are said and done what we learn from most is how the journey was to get where we are going not necessarily when we arrived. I love the imagery you used. Very nicely written.

GUSTY

10/05/2010

YOU'RE REALLY NICE AND I LOVE THE PERSPECTIVE FROM WHERE YOU APPRECIATED THIS WORK. MANY THAKS, DEAR MUYANA.

tierra7 commented on THE WAY UPSTREAM.

09-24-2010

Very inspirin'...Well done Dear, it takes hard decent work to get to where we want- its never handed to us- the anticipation makes live worth challenges- thank you for sharin' Namaste- Tierra@ }-'-,

SavVySam commented on THE WAY UPSTREAM.

09-13-2010

This is wonderful, look at all that would and could be missed...

GUSTY

09/13/2010

MY THANKS ARE YOURS, DEAR ONE, FOR YOUR GREAT IDEAS ABOUT THIS WORK; I WISH YOU ALL THE BEST!!!

ApaqRasgirl commented on THE WAY UPSTREAM.

09-10-2010

that was a great write dear, to fight against the flow of the terrain, wonderful write .........loved it ..........thanks for the wonderful read dear friend.........love asha

GUSTY

09/10/2010

THANKS APAQRASGIRL FOR LIKING IT.GOD BLESS YOU!!!

ApaqRasgirl

09/10/2010

please hon just call me asha............loves ya asha and you are welcome

cheronld commented on THE WAY UPSTREAM.

09-10-2010

Hmmm....going against the grain....these words I so love to live by...I like the metaphor....give a man a fish...he eats for a day...teach a man to fish....he eats for life....the easy way is not always the best way if we are to learn....nicely done...Cher

GUSTY

09/10/2010

MANY THANKS CHERONLD FOR LIKING IT! I LIKE YOUR WISE COMMENTS!!! PLEASE READ THE LATEST ONE FOR YOUR WEEKED'S ENJOYMENT;YOU'LL HAVE FUN!!!

Poetry comes nearer to vital truth than history.

Plato (BC 427-BC 347) Greek philosopher.

GUSTY’s Poems (27)

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"WHO CAME FIRST: SCIENCE OR RELIGION?" 3
'NO GRUDGE!' 2
MENNA MORGAN, MY SWEET-HEART !!! 7
MY YOUNG ORPHAN-FRIEND OF THE PARK. 5
EYES MAY CLOSE THE MORROW !!! 4
'NEW-YEAR TALKS' WORTH SHARING WITH ALL FRIENDS! 8
ODE TO 'YULE' . 7
...TO THE DEVIL, AT LAST, A DAUGHTER!!! 7
FRIENDSHIP DEAR! 9
ONE DOZEN 'NOTIONS' WITH ALL TO SHARE! 7
"WE MEN ABOUT WOMEN!" 7
MY CONDOLENCE! 7
CAUTION: ALLITERATION, PLEASE!!! 6
THE WAY UPSTREAM. 6
LET'S QUIT NOT...!!! 5
THOU ART THESE...AND ALL. 5
THE ADAGE OF BELOVED JOE! 4
POOR HER ! 4
HOORAY! 3
LEAVING A "SHAKED" HAITI. 3
FATE!!! 3
CHANGE'S HANDS. 1
'MY INNOCENT CHEEK'... 3
"FETCH YOUR TOOLS..." 4
WHY ? 5
AN INCH TO HELL ? 4
JUDGE THEM NOT. 4