The unwanted

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    The unwanted

    Being born to cry
    Being born to crawl
    Being born to eat
    Being born to walk
    Being born to live
    Only to feel unwanted
    By the same ones
    Who gave us this life

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    KuKa24 commented on The unwanted

    09-10-2009

    wow short n Straight to the point. I like that... It hits u nice n quick. Is truth...
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    pelaton3000

    09/10/2009

    Thank you for your interest I have known friends who were torn in pieces by their parents who didn't want much to do with them it's sad. Thanks for your comment.

    In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

    Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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