the umbell rose

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    i made this poem when i was 15 years old now 33 it still is so relevant

    the umbell rose

     im a little seed that lies within the ground
    waiting so desperately to be found...
    by a ray of sun, my battle has just begun
    rain falls caressing my roots becoming a flirt
    teasing me with its will
    a little scared and unprepared i push through the dirt
    i am in awe as i stretch to feel the world around me
    i lift my head to the sky and sigh im free
    now in full bloom
    my peddles most radiant red my past is barried so deep
    so deep its dead

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    pfr717 commented on the umbell rose

    03-20-2010

    The secret is in the seed, the power in the soil, the miracle is in the harvest! Please keep writing...this is very good, I enjoyed the bloom.
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    renee8312

    03/22/2010

    thanks i will

    Qualin commented on the umbell rose

    03-20-2010

    very different good write........qualin,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,
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    renee8312

    03/22/2010

    thanks

    A poem begins as a lump in the throat, a sense of wrong, a homesickness, a lovesickness. It finds the thought and the thought finds the words.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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