The Suicide Prayer

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    The Suicide Prayer

     Life is hard and I cannot survive, I just give up and now it is time to die. No more sarrow and no more pain it really does not matter because it was always the same.

    I lost my love, my job and my car. I tried to change thingsbut I did not get far. There is nothing left to do you see, just leave me alone and let me be.

    I heard a loud soundand then I saw a sudden flash, then I closed my eyes and I saw my life pass. My life is gone but I do not care, even though it seemed so un-fair.

    It is cold down here and where is the sun? This is not what I expected, This is not very fun. I miss the sun and all its warmth, I miss my life for what it was worth.

    There is no sound, now where I lay. There is no night and there is no day. Please dear God, don't let me die, wake me now from where I lie.

    There is no sound of singing birds, there is no songs that can be heard. Nothing is here but fear an blackness, Please dear God come sooth the maddness.

    I miss the feeling of a cool summer breeze and I miss the sight of the waves from the seas. I miss the love that set me free, Please dear God come rescue me.

    I miss the sounds of my friends laughing, I miss the times that we were having. I was weak and I did not care, please dear God, help me, this is not fair.

    Now I know that it is too late, I have lost my will and I have sealed my fate. Even though life seems so un-fair. Pay close attention to this Suicide Prayer.

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    cecilb1 commented on The Suicide Prayer

    07-08-2010

    I like your suicide prayer, but instead should you entitle it "Lost of Hope prayer. The ryhymes and verses together makes it so interesting when you recite this piece which you wrote. It all fits and make sense. Very poetic when mentioning nature as well when expressing your "Suicide Prayer".
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    Jacqueline51712 commented on The Suicide Prayer

    07-06-2010

    The rescue is here, I am very sorry for not rescuing you at that time, I hope I am not too late. GOD,MY MASTER, I AM SO SORRY FOR NOT COMING IN OP FOR YOUR PEOPLE. I AM NOW HERE TO HELP MY BROTHER'S & SIS IN CHRIST. On earth, there would be no sorrow, but after death there will be final purification before final judgement to where you would be. If you've committed suicide, it is mortal sin and it is straight to hell. The people on earth are not supposed to belong in another man-made religion because they will not be accepted in our kingdom, heaven because other religion have no eternal life. There's only one Church in Heaven and it is only Jesus Christ's established Church, Catholic so how can other people in different religion follow if they don't know how Catholic because they oppose? IN PURIFICATION: It is every Venial sins or lesser amount of faults. It's like saying each sin has a day under the flame. Imagine people in other religion... It is up to you to follow because as what Jesus Christ said,"One who listens to you, listens to me, the one who rejects you, rejects me and everyone who rejects me rejects the One who sent me" (the Gospel of St. Luke) Peace man, I hope you choose the right decision... Take Care
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