The Shrine Without Love

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The Shrine Without Love

Words shall been spoken for the greatest lords;

Without no meanings for the truth of those.

Who scares the pain of the forgiven love;

The shrine of living with roses and luck.



Roses and proses can give us prop;

Things that exchanged our styles for long.

Populates hearts of words in lonely sorts;

The world is shifting the instincts of those.



Fighting the war for rising peace and love;

Without no reason we kill them all.

Those who swear for the name of god;

Are the first one who fooled our luck.



Just a vagabond in a state of support;

A desired aspiration for being more.

A perception without no lust to reprove;

Cant no longer be so absurd to be truth.


By: Edison J. Torres Soto

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tinygirl commented on The Shrine Without Love

02-05-2009

it really got inside me and made me know how you can express your words on paper

tinygirl commented on The Shrine Without Love

11-30-2008

your poem was wonderfull read some of mine tinygirl

lilfairie commented on The Shrine Without Love

11-29-2008

Wow, we should all be so lucky to be able to write with such passion.

When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

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