The Release (freestyle)

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    The Release (freestyle)

     Damn...haven't flowed in days; it seems like weeks...
    I've been at my lowest lows and highest peaks...
    I've still been at the rhymes just sharpening the things
    that come pouring out my mouth when I choose to speak...
    These cowards 'sleep!
    Don't have what it takes to face the consequences
    of venturin into the deep...
    Unknown like some of your peep's peeps...
    Me I stay awake and uncensored; no bleeps...
    Street creeps better know who they're dealing with before they play.
    I stand for truth and revolution any day...
    Any person deservin can get mentally blown away... in a heartbeat.
    Reversin the peace for justice is necessary sometimes...
    In some rhymes the vibe is highly stylized but this is just real time
    thoughts that rhyme...vines that climb steadily, lyrically...
    Sticky and thick as some syrup be...
    Tryna speak on love every day as I make my weary way...
    But as of yet...as of today!?!
    These ears that aren't listenin aren't hearin me....
    The hot water the planet is in is fuckin searin me...
    Steering me in every direction like a museum collection...
    From the killing of Creation's perfection
    to the spread of ferocious atrocious infection;
    The shit going on these days is no joke...
    The complacity of the "Audacity of Hope"...
    The rich are all richer, the banks are all broke...
    My moms treading water and can't stay afloat... 
    This red and green dope that I smoke makes me choke but I cope.
    Like a rodeo clown, painted face and a rope;
    Distraction from the current frustrations...
    Until the governments' mouths are all washed out with soap...
    And I feel a sense of satisfaction I suppose...
    Rid the air up there of every last nose
    and spray everything down with a garden hose.
    This isn't literal, its only prose.
    If you ask me to lie I will probably say no...
    So tell me your troubles and hand me your woes...
    A yellow rose that stays with you wherever you go...
    Like the wind in your hair when it blows...
    I will lend you my ears and tell you my tears;
    And grant you a piece of my soul...

    BECAUSE I LOVE THE RELEASE OF THE FLOW....

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    monkyntz commented on The Release (freestyle)

    08-09-2009

    how much more can i say about you without sounding like a broken record like ur stuff
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    DeepEclipse commented on The Release (freestyle)

    07-31-2009

    Smooth shit. I like that ferocious atrocious infection line. Smiled at that one ;P There were a few spots that lost me, but the thing was solid. And I like it when they end with the name of the poem. Somethin about that just grabs me. Smooth write.
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    jadienblu commented on The Release (freestyle)

    07-09-2009

    whata beautiful truth even still...how do you have a strap on your ratings?cuz'.....i dont know ...but.... i get 2 lefted and no one wants to leave as many messages as they want to rate ....
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    SILKYTWEED commented on The Release (freestyle)

    06-26-2009

    OWWW....This is Fire, duh I guess that is why you are MizBlaze, you keep doing your thang, I appreciate you and your game and show I say flow, its tight, but then again you already know...Thanks for sharing (smile)!
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    jbbuzn commented on The Release (freestyle)

    06-20-2009

    Nice flow like a river rapid rap I did, do and done to me its fun one on one with the microphone straight from the dome
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    In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

    Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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