THE REAL WORLD

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  • Emotional
    • REEN
    • FEELING LIFE AND THE HEREAFTER

    Poem Commentary

    I am a paranormal investigator, who is also a empath, i feel things and feel the spirits emotions, esp. if it is a sadness. I wrote this as this is trully how I feel.

    THE REAL WORLD

     walking in the feeling begins,
    the past the rust
    emotions embedded in everything I touch!
    how many walk behind the veil?
    investigators looking for the holy grail
    intensity within
    my head begins to spin
    fun house effect is it the truth?
    I begin to feel what will I lose?
    closeness skin begins to tell
    something that has been close to hell
    I don't turn the page
    might act on the rage
    fear will never take control
    the madness begins!
    they want me to know they are there!
    a touch a sting
    pulling my hair! Im tired feeling wasted
    can't hardly walk
    is that someone trying to talk?
    a beacon they say
    lost in the way.....

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    lizardlylove09 commented on THE REAL WORLD

    10-12-2009

    i really like this one a lot. You write a lot like i do.. i mean we have a lot of simalarities in the way we write things...
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    REEN

    10/12/2009

    THIS IS SO TRUE WE DO!! ISNT IT COOL??

    In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

    Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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