THE LOVE OF MY LIFE

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    THE LOVE OF MY LIFE

     You have been patient and i thank you alot
    becouse very few peapole seem to have what we got.

    it took a long time to be really sure
    but i am the elment and you are the cure.

    Love without you is a life without love
    like living on earth without the heavens above.

    Love without is a day without time
    a million years pass and the sun never shines.

    my love for you can hardly be told
    its something you sell but can never be told

    Among all these words im tring to say
    is "I LOVE YOU" in a very speacial way.

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    ESSENCEOFLOVE commented on THE LOVE OF MY LIFE

    10-04-2010

    I love the way you spoke so plainly about the love you feel. It is a powerful feeling and you conveyed it well. Great job.
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    leapord

    10/04/2010

    thank you very much i really appreciate that

    In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

    Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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