THE LOOKS YOU GAVE
the looks you gaveHate fear loss,
i couldn't believe
that you blamed me.
you cheated! you were with him!
you said you were sick, i'm sick of this.
i wanted you to be mine alone.
never mind, chase him instead!
THE LOOKS YOU GAVE
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Hate fear loss,
i couldn't believe
that you blamed me.
you cheated! you were with him!
you said you were sick, i'm sick of this.
i wanted you to be mine alone.
never mind, chase him instead!
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Chaos128 commented on THE LOOKS YOU GAVE
11-30-2010
- Straight up and no sugar added. Been there done that, Face-man, and know I how it feels, though it feels like a lifetime ago. In any relationship, the most important ingredient is trust. If you ain't got trust, you ain't got nothin'. I know it doesn't feel like it, but she did you a favor. Great work!
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janet commented on THE LOOKS YOU GAVE
11-21-2010
- Very raw, I love the passion and the thoughtless expression of emotion. Poetry is at its greatest when you don't see the words on the page...only the color...awesome!
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faceofthelost commented on THE LOOKS YOU GAVE
11-20-2010
- my girlfriend did this to me. she's already clinging to another guy. whispering the same stuff in his ears. it makes me sick
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11/21/2010
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