The knife

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    The knife

     

     A knife has two sides

     A side to bring joy

      A side to bring sorrow

    The knife I have used

     The side of joy through taste

      The knife
           I have used through the taste of doing

       The eyes are different.

    The eyes of joy speak of the great taste

      The eyes of doing
           look upon with ended known

    The eyes of the knife bring you to where?

      They bring to look upon the joy

      My relish of the knife is double edged 

     

                                                                                Written by

                                                                                     Dale Edward Van Oxon

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    teasasue commented on The knife

    08-16-2009

    that is cool, most everything these days are very much double edged.
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    Plot121 commented on The knife

    08-15-2009

    The concept I agree is very thought provoking but i think your ideas need to be stuctured to a core idea or message you wish to convey to the reader just a though and you may want to use look over some of the context in the your words just a thought.
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    1990lh commented on The knife

    08-15-2009

    ok i like it i thought it was poem nice concept. keep it up
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    kochab commented on The knife

    08-15-2009

    I like this work a lot edward. Keep writing friend, you have a great potential in yourself lurking in wait to be awakened further.
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    Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

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