The Ideal You

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    The Ideal You

    “The Ideal you”


    If I could build a perfect mate I would start at the bottom with a solid foundation, then to carve my way up to courage and honesty. I would give great detail to commitment, with an equal essence of innocence too.

    If I could have an Ideal you, I would plaster you with strength to carry me when I am weak, then smother you with understanding, so that you could intercede for me when
    circumstances are greater than you or I. I would paste integrity all over you, knowing that you would stand for what you believe.

    If I could mold an immaculate you, there would be an ounce or two of arrogance, showing the confidence of who you are. I couldn’t go too much further without adding humor; the recipe for healthy living is laughter. I would give you a deserved portion of intellect and desire. This would keep you on the continuous quest to know more and never stop.

    Finally, I would give you a good sprinkle of humility, a dash of tenderness, and a hearts load of love, you will need this to go to the Father for knowledge and wisdom. Now I can seal you with a kiss and sign you with gratitude, for I have “The Ideal You!”



    Missval ,09

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    klassik commented on The Ideal You

    09-03-2009

    you are a poet! no wasted motions, loved this piece while!

    Kdaddy commented on The Ideal You

    08-29-2009

    I enjoyed this read. Your analogy use was perfect. Thanks for sharing.

    Hamma commented on The Ideal You

    03-10-2009

    i could you add a dose of some of those things to myself.

    Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

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