The falls...

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    The falls...

    I sit on the hard wet rock,
    My feet dangling 50 below.

    I smell the fresh water,
    sparkling, swaying under me.

    I see the little rush of water,
    falling from the falls.

    I hear the sound of birds,
    whistling in the trees above me.

    I taste the cool, wet mist,
    of the sparkling wet falls.

    Then I know Awwww...
    Its the feeling of summer.

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    Dreamer123 commented on The falls...

    07-23-2009

    This is so cool!l love it! It set mood! Very peaceful! :D! l enjoyed it. keep upthe great Work!

    optimistic commented on The falls...

    07-22-2009

    yes this was a great write indeed you are a good writer so much poise and confidence, in this poem.

    bushnell1993

    07/23/2009

    Ohhh thankss. ((: Im looking forward to checking out some of your poems also.. ((: --bush

    1990lh commented on The falls...

    07-22-2009

    i like ireally like this poem it s so care free i love it love your hold style great job

    bushnell1993

    07/23/2009

    Ohh thanks && I will .. ((:

    swashington commented on The falls...

    07-22-2009

    THIS WAS SHORT AND TO THE POINT GOOD JOB KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK.

    bushnell1993

    07/22/2009

    Aww thankss. ((; I will go and check some of your poems out. --bush

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